In Te Ngahere we have been writing about New Zealander explores like Kupe, Maui and Nukutawhiti. We had to write our explorers of our choice is important to New Zealand history. We were writing how they got here, what were their impact on New Zealand and what the did in New Zealand. I did Kupe because the was the first person to find New Zealand. What I did well was putting my paragraphs in order and making sure that my sentences is correct. What I could do better is maybe add more detail to make my writing more interesting for the person who is reading it.
Here is my writing.
Kupe was a polynesian navigator who was the person/polynesian to find New Zealand in 925 AD because an octopus called Te Wheke-a-Muturangi drag kupe to New Zealand due to the fact that kupe was trying to kill the octopus for his tribe in Hawaiki but the didn’t kill the octopus because Te Wheke-a-Muturangi was by it's ancestor, Tamatea.
When he got to New Zealand he took a look around at the North Island for a place for his people at Hawaiki. So he went back to Hawaiki and told his villagers about New Zealand and so his villagers agree to come to New Zealand and explore New Zealand. A few days later the villagers said that they liked New Zealand.
Kupe then went back to Hawaiki to help some villagers hunt and find food for his people who stayed in Hawaiki because some of them didn’t want to go New Zealand or because there wasn’t any room to go on the waka due to the fact that if they go the wrong way, then they would be lost, hungry, thusty, no one around and nowhere to go. Kupe and his children departed New Zealand leaving 3 dogs to go hunt for food and protect the pa of Hokianga.
I think Kupe did a great job finding New Zealand because New Zealand is good with trees, nature and even people. I also think Kupe did a good job raising his people in New Zealand because New Zealand is a great country to stay in, including for the the tourist, for examples they can visited the statue of kupe in Wellington, go to the Treaty Grounds in Waitangi and even know how New Zealand got its name. And we can all say thanks to Kupe and his wife calling New Zealand Aotearoa and New Zealand.