My Poem

In Te Ngahere we were writing our own poem, but in metaphors. We were not allow to use I and because, it was easy a-bit. What I did well in my learning is that I probably got about 4 metaphors, what I  need to do next time in my learning is to try not use simile on my writing. I hope you like my poem. :)

Dayton is a Bugatti, fast and ready to go.

Dayton is an emoji, happy and cool.

Dayton is a pug, cute and cuddly.

Dayton is a couch, soft and comfortable.

Dayton is a diary who keeps secrets.

My Pepeha

For 2 weeks in Te Ngahere we have been learning how to explain our pepeha. We need to know our pepeha so we know where we are from. What we did is that we had to do it on a powtoon or a presentation. I made it on a powtoon. What I did well is that I didn't get distracted by my friends, but the problem was that powtoon was a bit glitchy but I manage to get it done. What I can do better is that I need to not put capitals in the wrong places on my pepeha.