In Te Ngahere we were writing our own poem, but in metaphors. We were not allow to use I and because, it was easy a-bit. What I did well in my learning is that I probably got about 4 metaphors, what I need to do next time in my learning is to try not use simile on my writing. I hope you like my poem. :)
Dayton is a Bugatti, fast and ready to go.
Dayton is an emoji, happy and cool.
Dayton is a pug, cute and cuddly.
Dayton is a couch, soft and comfortable.
Dayton is a diary who keeps secrets.
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