A few weeks ago we did surf live saving, the lifeguards names were Liam, Toobs and Sam. We did games, water games and how to stay safe in the water games. First we had to go in the whare and talk about how to keep safe in the water. The second day we go to the beach and learn and have fun. If you want me to change any words you want me to change in the writing please comment me. Here is a photo.
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ReplyDeleteHi Dayton what a great thing to talk about to share with other people. I liked it when you add there names. Dayton do you really need to say comment me if you want me to fix my writing?
ReplyDeleteHi Dayton I like the writing you did on surf life safety you also explained the games and things you did with them and what you did the next day with them. It's a great piece of writing, also you spelt all the words right.
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