Here is my story.
The Riddle Challenge
One day a nine year old boy called Edward had started his new school at Lesson school in New York. One day a man came into the school and had a riddle for all of them.
The riddle man was a weird man that had a weird hat, jacket, shoes and riddles. Edward felt like the sun because he was hot from the sun. “Riddle me this, what lies on the ground that has full of holes, and have some sort of smell, that is you're riddle everyone.”
The man was name the riddle man. When Edward got back home from school he didn’t know the riddle. He and mum had to guess the riddle, but first the riddle man came into the house and said, “you won’t know the riddle.”
The riddle man went out of the house. Edward was nervous. Edward said,”he said what lies on the ground with full of holes, and have some sort of smell, I know, HIM.”
Tomorrow at school the riddle man said, “the answer was me. Who got that right,” Edward put his hand up. “Wow, you have a prize, a riddler trophy. His friend's and teacher clap at him and he was the best at riddles.
Hi Dayton i really liked your story and and i really liked how you used information in your story.
ReplyDeleteHi Dayton
ReplyDeleteI like your writing. You put lots of details in the writing. It’s good that you said wow because I would say great, a prize. Do you like writing.I kind of like writing. Bye. Keep up the good work